tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3862456000683455382.post3624493983636803212..comments2023-09-14T21:41:20.539-04:00Comments on Melissa Writes Fiction: Fiction Friday - Peeping AlbertAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13119346100467282321noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3862456000683455382.post-82899958751711814212010-09-08T01:27:57.966-04:002010-09-08T01:27:57.966-04:00Welcome Melissa! I think I would have liked more i...Welcome Melissa! I think I would have liked more insight into Stella's decision, it's not an easy one to make for a teenager! Your writing did flow nicely and pull me in. Hope to see you again on Friday!Staceyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16675799736197726920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3862456000683455382.post-64116753648791052802010-09-06T22:03:37.195-04:002010-09-06T22:03:37.195-04:00A belated welcome to Fiction Friday! You did a goo...A belated welcome to Fiction Friday! You did a good job of making Albert even more despicible than he was in the original piece. Your teen characters are quite hard to be able to concoct such a perfectly executed murder. I am glad I don't live in your neighbourhood.Jason Cogginshttp://www.moultworld.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3862456000683455382.post-91262582549848132802010-09-04T16:22:32.575-04:002010-09-04T16:22:32.575-04:00Your story flowed beautifully right up the last se...Your story flowed beautifully right up the last sentence! I hope to read more in the future.keiths ramblingshttp://www.keithsramblings.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3862456000683455382.post-83498623281347952822010-09-04T16:13:47.620-04:002010-09-04T16:13:47.620-04:00Welcome to Fiction Friday! I liked the way you co...Welcome to Fiction Friday! I liked the way you connected the characters the way you did. Interesting take on it. Nicely done!Shellihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03068094486297918345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3862456000683455382.post-78189894103326532572010-09-03T21:13:59.954-04:002010-09-03T21:13:59.954-04:00Not too bad!
Go post the link to this story on the...Not too bad!<br />Go post the link to this story on the Fiction Friday page. http://tinyurl.com/23eeks5John Penderhttp://johnpender.netnoreply@blogger.com